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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Is the second part of this sentence properly worded? Laurana made her son flee with his people into exile, while she stayed behind to lead a force of elven soldiers and their allies in the defense of Qualinost.
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I am not a teacher but I have managed four different forms to your sentence. Whether they are any better, however, is sujbective, as I think your sentence is correct anyway. On Laurana's command, her son and his people fled into exile, while she stayed behind leading an allied force of soldiers in the defense of Qualinost.
- I am not a teacher but I have managed four different forms to your sentence.
- Whether they are any better, however, is sujbective, as I think your sentence is correct anyway.
- On Laurana's command, her son and his people fled into exile, while she stayed behind leading an allied force of soldiers in the defense of Qualinost.
- On Laurana's command, her son and his people fled into exile, while she stayed behind leading an allied force of soldiers, of which were mostly Elven, in the defense of Qualinost.
- Laurana's son and his people fled into exile on her command, while she stayed behind leading an allied force of soldiers in the defense of Qualinost.
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I am not a teacher but I have managed four different forms to your sentence. Whether they are any better, however, is sujbective, as I think your sentence is correct anyway.
On Laurana's command, her son and his people fled into exile, while she stayed behind leading an allied force of soldiers in the defense of Qualinost.
On Laurana's command, her son and his people fled into ex
On Laurana's command, her son and his people fled into exile, while she stayed behind leading an allied force of soldiers in the defense of Qualinost.
On Laurana's command, her son and his people fled into ex
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