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English 1b3 Posted 15 years ago
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Which do you prefer?

And, if any, which is/are incorrect grammar?

a The application was much easier to use on the blackberry because its application had a very clear help menu.

b The application was much easier to use on the blackberry because the application had a very clear help menu.

c The application was much easier to use on the blackberry, the application of which had a very clear help menu.

d The application was much easier to use on the blackberry, whose application had a very clear help menu.

e The application was much easier to use on the blackberry, on which the application had a very clear help menu.

Cheers,

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'Blackberry' should be capitalized. All seem grammatically correct, though E is certainly the most awkward, with C not far behind it. A, B and D all seem fine to me.

  • 'Blackberry' should be capitalized.
  • All seem grammatically correct, though E is certainly the most awkward, with C not far behind it.
  • A, B and D all seem fine to me.
  • A and B make the reasoning more clear.
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'Blackberry' should be capitalized. All seem grammatically correct, though E is certainly the most awkward, with C not far behind it. A, B and D all seem fine to me. A and B make the reasoning more clear.

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