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Snarf Posted 14 years ago
Grammar
Sentence Variation Query
The Judge's lips are pursed together in horror and turmoil as he stares at John.
Is this sentence OK the way it is? I'm wondering if I should change it around so that it's: The Judge's lips are pursed together as he stares at John in horror and turmoil. The thing is, though, that it's the Judge who is in horror and turmoil, not John.
Thanks.
Is this sentence OK the way it is? I'm wondering if I should change it around so that it's: The Judge's lips are pursed together as he stares at John in horror and turmoil. The thing is, though, that it's the Judge who is in horror and turmoil, not John.
Thanks.
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Hi Snarf; Your first sentence is fine.
- Hi Snarf; Your first sentence is fine.
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