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Cute572 Posted 16 years ago
Letter Writing
Sentence --- too casual
Which sentence is nice and informal? if none then feel free for suggestions.
1. Sadly our New york branch, name, is going through a rough/tough time
2. Sadly our New york branch, name, is experiencing difficult time.
3. Sadly our New york branch, name, is having some hard time.
All these sound too casual and conversational. I am writing a letter and it supposed to be my first line--main idea, topic sentence.
Please do suggest me something better than these. Or Should I change whole context?
Thanks
1. Sadly our New york branch, name, is going through a rough/tough time
2. Sadly our New york branch, name, is experiencing difficult time.
3. Sadly our New york branch, name, is having some hard time.
All these sound too casual and conversational. I am writing a letter and it supposed to be my first line--main idea, topic sentence.
Please do suggest me something better than these. Or Should I change whole context?
Thanks
Top answer
Sadly our New york branch, name, is going through a rough/tough time. That sounds more intersting or you can write Despondently our New York branch, name, is going through a jagged time.
- Sadly our New york branch, name, is going through a rough/tough time.
- That sounds more intersting or you can write Despondently our New York branch, name, is going through a jagged time.
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Sadly our New york branch, name, is going through a rough/tough time. That sounds more intersting or you can write
Despondently our New York branch, name, is going through a jagged
time.
Despondently our New York branch, name, is going through a jagged
time.
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