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Rzav4ina Posted 13 years ago
Grammar
Sentence that makes some doubts
Could you tell me please if the sentence I showed is correct or not?
Traditionally, preparation of beer includes next stages: malt is handled with mashing and filtration processes followed by wort boiling with hop, which is subsequently removed from material, and its clarifying, when the initial temperature of fermentation is achieved, wort is exposed by two types of fermentation changed by clarifying and packaging.
Traditionally, preparation of beer includes next stages: malt is handled with mashing and filtration processes followed by wort boiling with hop, which is subsequently removed from material, and its clarifying, when the initial temperature of fermentation is achieved, wort is exposed by two types of fermentation changed by clarifying and packaging.
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Hello, Rzav4ina—and welcome to English Forums. I am not a beer expert, but this is better grammar: Traditionally, the preparation of beer includes these stages: malt is mashed and filtered, and the the wort is lautered and boiled with hops , which are subsequently removed. The wort is clarified when the initial temperature of fermentation is achieved , and then it is exposed by two types of fermentation .
- Hello, Rzav4ina—and welcome to English Forums.
- I am not a beer expert, but this is better grammar: Traditionally, the preparation of beer includes these stages: malt is mashed and filtered, and the the wort is lautered and boiled with hops , which are subsequently removed.
- The wort is clarified when the initial temperature of fermentation is achieved , and then it is exposed by two types of fermentation .
- It is further changed by clarifying and packaging.
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Hello, Rzav4ina—and welcome to English Forums. I am not a beer expert, but this is better grammar:
Traditionally, the preparation of beer includes these stages: malt is mashed and filtered, and the the wort is lautered and boiled with hops, which are subsequently removed. The wort is clarified when the initial temperature of fermentation is achieved
Traditionally, the preparation of beer includes these stages: malt is mashed and filtered, and the the wort is lautered and boiled with hops, which are subsequently removed. The wort is clarified when the initial temperature of fermentation is achieved
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Thank you very much for your reply but I think some of the modifications in the sentence changed the order of the processes. Could you explain me please why you used "the" before "preparation". I meant that these steps include preparation of all beer but not specific one.
Could you tell me please if these changes will suit better:
Traditionally, the preparation of beer includes
Could you tell me please if these changes will suit better:
Traditionally, the preparation of beer includes
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Rzav4inat I think some of the modifications in the sentence changed the order of the processes.No; I referred to an on-line brewing procedures description while typing my response.
Rzav4inaCould you tell me please if these changes will suit better:Of course, I think my own is fine, but you may use yours if you like. It is
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Yes, you are right it is awkward. I like your version more but I still feel that the order of processes is a little bit different.
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