Sentence that makes sense?
Hallo!
If I formulate a sentence for my cover letter like this, does it make sense?
"Your future-oriented and focused processes, the variety of addressed sectors and the services performed at the highest level by [the organization] are in line with my vision of ??an ideal employer I can identify with."
Thank you
Top answer
This sounds too much like you are trying to impress and also to flatter the reader. I isuggest you focus more on yourself and your more practical skills and achievements.
- This sounds too much like you are trying to impress and also to flatter the reader.
- I isuggest you focus more on yourself and your more practical skills and achievements.
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This sounds too much like you are trying to impress and also to flatter the reader.
I isuggest you focus more on yourself and your more practical skills and achievements.
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