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Can you tell me whether this sentence could be written in a much shorter version?:
Have you ever met a person who caused a great impression on you and you remember this person years after you met him/her?
For some reason, I find the question above too long and convoluted. well, that's my impression; what do you think? Please let me know.
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apatzinguense I find the question above too long and convoluted. well, that's my impression; what do you think? I don't find it so, but I find 'cause' wrong.
- apatzinguense I find the question above too long and convoluted.
- well, that's my impression; what do you think?
- I don't find it so, but I find 'cause' wrong.
- You can amputate the end of the sentence.
- Have you ever met a person who made a great impression on you and you remember this person years afterward?
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apatzinguenseI find the question above too long and convoluted. well, that's my impression; what do you think?
I don't find it so, but I find 'cause' wrong. You can amputate the end of the sentence.
Have you ever met a person who made a great impression on you and you remember this person years
0You could also say eg Have you ever met someone who impressed you so much that you still remember him/her years later?
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