It was an remarkable event...at least in my opinion...very effective and emotive.
It was an remarkable event,at least in my opinion,very effective and emotive.
Thus, the story, instead of focusing on loose shock tactics, takes it's time with character development.
Are these sentences ok?
Can you use the ellipsis in the same way as the comma has been used in the second sentence?
And can you start a sentence with 'Thus' and do the commas after story necessary?
panda blue 483 It was a remarkable event ... at least in my opinion ... very effective and emotive.
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panda blue 483It was a remarkable event ... at least in my opinion ... very effective and emotive.
Note the spaces around the ellipses. This sentence is rather loosely or casually punctuated. It appears rather like a succession of