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Meimei MianDianRen Posted 17 years ago
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Dear all



Could you please check my letter?

Thank you so much.



Please see the attached file for the new volunteer roster for May to July. It will be starting on Monday 25/05/2009.

Just in case if you have any difficult to do with them please let me know and I will tell them.

And also would like to invite all of you to brief informal ceremony to say goodbye to the present volunteers and to welcome to the new comers. It will be held on Friday 29/05/2009 at the Self –access centre at 5:15 pm.

  

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This is what I would say: Please see the attached [information pertaining to] the new volunteer(s) assigned for May through July. The incoming volunteers will be starting on Monday 25/05/2009. Just in case / in the event that you have difficulty / issues with the new volunteer crew please let me know and I will clarify the issues with them.

  • This is what I would say: Please see the attached [information pertaining to] the new volunteer(s) assigned for May through July.
  • The incoming volunteers will be starting on Monday 25/05/2009.
  • Just in case / in the event that you have difficulty / issues with the new volunteer crew please let me know and I will clarify the issues with them.
  • I also would like to invite all of you to the informal farewell ceremony to say goodbye to the current members of the volunteer team, and also take this opportunity to welcome next crew.
  • The ceremony will be held on Friday 29/05/2009 starting at 5:15 pm at the Self –access centre..
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This is what I would say:

Please see the attached [information pertaining to] the new volunteer(s) assigned for May through July. The incoming volunteers will be starting on Monday 25/05/2009.

Just in case / in the event that you have difficulty / issues with the new volunteer crew please let me know and I will clarify the issues with them.

I also would like to invite a

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