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Too finicky 7 Posted 6 years ago
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Please review these sentences


1. I don't know your credibility as a film critic unless I go through your reviews of past movie releases.

or

I don't know your credibility as a film critic but to know that I have to go through your reviews of past movie releases.


2. He may not have the comfort of a car but his jacket is strong enough to withstand the hammering of rain.

( Context : Picture of a person sitting in car and a man using his jacket to cover himself from rain.)

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too finicky 7 1. I don't know your credibility as a film critic unless I go through your reviews of past movie releases. or I don't know your credibility as a film critic but to know that I have to go through your reviews of past movie releases.

— CalifJim

  • too finicky 7 1.
  • I don't know your credibility as a film critic unless I go through your reviews of past movie releases.
  • or I don't know your credibility as a film critic but to know that I have to go through your reviews of past movie releases.
  • Only the first one is good.
  • too finicky 7 2.
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too finicky 7

1. I don't know your credibility as a film critic unless I go through your reviews of past movie releases.

or

I don't know your credibility as a film critic but to know that I have to go through your reviews of past movie releases.

Only the first one is good.

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