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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Sentence structure problem

Ok so I would like some help making this sentence more fluent.

The clouds are painted at a slant and with lots of tones and texture to give an effect as if in motion.



Could someone please help me. Thanks : )
  

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The clouds are rendered obliquely and with tones and textures to create the effect of motion.

  • The clouds are rendered obliquely and with tones and textures to create the effect of motion.
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The clouds are rendered obliquely and with tones and textures to create the effect of motion.
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