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Wonder123 Posted 13 years ago
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sentence structure - please help.

Please check the below sentences and let your thoughts.

It really gives a great happiness to the guests when they see this beautiful flower girl wearing a cute outfit, holding handful of flower petal, walking ahead of the couple and guiding them by(or as she or while she throws) throwing petals under their feet.

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It really gives great pleasure to the guests to see this beautiful flower girl, in her charming outfit, walking ahead of the couple and strewing flower petals along their path.

— Mister Micawber

  • It really gives great pleasure to the guests to see this beautiful flower girl, in her charming outfit, walking ahead of the couple and strewing flower petals along their path.
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It really gives great pleasure to the guests to see this beautiful flower girl, in her charming outfit, walking ahead of the couple and strewing flower petals along their path.
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