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Rosegold04 Posted 8 years ago
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many people claim that cellphones have improved the quality of life of many people for the good?

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many people claim that cellphones have improved the quality of life of many people for the better?

  

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or many people claim that cellphones have improved the quality of life of many people for the better? Both contain egregious redundancies: 'improve' = 'make good/better', and 'many people' is a boring repetition. Many people claim that cellphones have improved their quality of life.

— Mister Micawber

  • or many people claim that cellphones have improved the quality of life of many people for the better?
  • Both contain egregious redundancies: 'improve' = 'make good/better', and 'many people' is a boring repetition.
  • Many people claim that cellphones have improved their quality of life.
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rosegold04many people claim that cellphones have improved the quality of life of many people for the good?or many people claim that cellphones have improved the quality of life of many people for the better?

Both contain egregious redundancies: 'improve' = 'make good/better', and 'many people' is a boring repetition.

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