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Yohooo8 Posted 21 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Sentence structure help
This is my blog entry, please help on the grammar and sentence structure.
Another year has just been past, I feel like the time is flies like everyone says. I can’t even believe it’s already year 2005 now. It’s just too fast to be the year of 2005 in my mind. During the year of 2004, I have done much I have ever imagined. And I have also lost something I shouldn’t have lost. There was so many of great memories during this year as well. I have captured most of the great moment during this year and there will be never gone in my life. And thanks for those of you who for hanging with me all round the whole year, I much value that much and much. Last night was great too, hey you, thank you for being with me to finish the line of 2004. The count down moment was so inerasable; I know you’ll be always there for me, this year and until the rest of my life. The friendship between us will least forever right? While it was counting down, there was so many of hopes and goals I have set for the next year. I truly believe that I could achieve these goals as I have already achieved goals I have made last year. Let’s holding our hands and walk thru the year of 2005 and happy new year to all my friends.
P.S Here is the photos.
http://www.friendphotos.com/thumbnails.php?album=216&page=1
Another year has just been past, I feel like the time is flies like everyone says. I can’t even believe it’s already year 2005 now. It’s just too fast to be the year of 2005 in my mind. During the year of 2004, I have done much I have ever imagined. And I have also lost something I shouldn’t have lost. There was so many of great memories during this year as well. I have captured most of the great moment during this year and there will be never gone in my life. And thanks for those of you who for hanging with me all round the whole year, I much value that much and much. Last night was great too, hey you, thank you for being with me to finish the line of 2004. The count down moment was so inerasable; I know you’ll be always there for me, this year and until the rest of my life. The friendship between us will least forever right? While it was counting down, there was so many of hopes and goals I have set for the next year. I truly believe that I could achieve these goals as I have already achieved goals I have made last year. Let’s holding our hands and walk thru the year of 2005 and happy new year to all my friends.
P.S Here is the photos.
http://www.friendphotos.com/thumbnails.php?album=216&page=1
Top answer
Blog entries are supposed to be your own natural writing, Yoho-- personal ramblings, not carefully edited submissions. However, once won't hurt: Another year has just passed; I feel that time flies, like everyone says. I can't believe it's already 2005.
- Blog entries are supposed to be your own natural writing, Yoho-- personal ramblings, not carefully edited submissions.
- However, once won't hurt: Another year has just passed; I feel that time flies, like everyone says.
- I can't believe it's already 2005.
- Time has just passed too fast to be the year 2005 in my mind.
- During 2004, I did much more than I ever imagined.
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Blog entries are supposed to be your own natural writing, Yoho-- personal ramblings, not carefully edited submissions. However, once won't hurt:
Another year has just passed; I feel that time flies, like everyone says. I can't believe it's already 2005. Time has just passed too fast to be the year 2005 in my mind. During 2004, I did much more than I ever imagined. And I also lost
Another year has just passed; I feel that time flies, like everyone says. I can't believe it's already 2005. Time has just passed too fast to be the year 2005 in my mind. During 2004, I did much more than I ever imagined. And I also lost
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