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Johnie Posted 8 years ago
Grammar

Sentence structure check

Is there a better way to rephrase the sentence below? Thanks


Snow, earthquakes, and heavy wind will all need to be considered to declare to the public that the design is safe.

  

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One must consider possible effects of snow, earthquakes and heavy winds when declaring to the public that the design is safe.

  • One must consider possible effects of snow, earthquakes and heavy winds when declaring to the public that the design is safe.
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One must consider possible effects of snow, earthquakes and heavy winds when declaring to the public that the design is safe.

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johnieSnow, earthquakes, and heavy wind will all need to be considered to declare before declaring to the public that the design is safe.

One possible rephrase is shown above.

CJ

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