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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
Grammar
Sentence structure and wording
Is this sentence worded in the correct way, particularly the 'now the Kingpriest' part? Cathan explained his dream to Beldinas, now the Kingpriest, who determined that a new knighthood was needed to protect Istar and destroy its enemies.
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I have managed to word it differently to you, but it may only be one of many possible forms: Cathan explained his dream to Beldinas, now the Kingpriest, who determined the need for a new knighthood protecting Istar from the enemies. 'and destroy its enemies' doesn't make sense in this sentence, so you ought to include it as another sentence.
- I have managed to word it differently to you, but it may only be one of many possible forms: Cathan explained his dream to Beldinas, now the Kingpriest, who determined the need for a new knighthood protecting Istar from the enemies.
- 'and destroy its enemies' doesn't make sense in this sentence, so you ought to include it as another sentence.
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I have managed to word it differently to you, but it may only be one of many possible forms:
Cathan explained his dream to Beldinas, now the Kingpriest, who determined the need for a new knighthood protecting Istar from the enemies.
'and destroy its enemies' doesn't make sense in this sentence, so you ought to include it as another sentence.
Cathan explained his dream to Beldinas, now the Kingpriest, who determined the need for a new knighthood protecting Istar from the enemies.
'and destroy its enemies' doesn't make sense in this sentence, so you ought to include it as another sentence.
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