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Calive Posted 16 years ago
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Sentence structure and punctuation

Please help me to figure which of the two is correct:


# 1. You may be doing well, but would it not help your business if

you had an additional resource--someone who is not

on your payrolls but who is always available to help you

with research?


# 2. You may be doing well, but would it not help your business if

you had an additional resource--someone, who is not

on your payrolls, but who is always available to help you

with research?



#3. You may be doing well, but would it not help your business if

you had an additional resource--someone who is not

on your payrolls, but who is always available to help you

with research?

Personally, I feel # 3 should be okay.



  

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Hi, Please help me to figure which of the two is correct: # 1. You may be doing well, but would it not help your business if you had an additional resource--someone who is not on your payrolls but who is always available to help you with research? # 2.

  • Hi, Please help me to figure which of the two is correct: # 1.
  • You may be doing well, but would it not help your business if you had an additional resource--someone who is not on your payrolls but who is always available to help you with research?
  • # 2.
  • You may be doing well, but would it not help your business if you had an additional resource--someone , who is not on your payrolls , but who is always available to help you with research?
  • #3.
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Hi,

Please help me to figure which of the two is correct:



# 1. You may be doing well, but would it not help your business if

you had an additional resource--someone who is not

on your payrolls but who is always available to help you

with research?



# 2. You may be doing well, but would it not help your business if
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You also caught me on "payrolls." Thanks, Clive.

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