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Algorithm and pseudocode-- although often mistaken as two things that are interchabgeable-- are vastly different from esch other. To point out the difference and clarify the bewilderment of most people, an algortihm is a basic step-by-step procedure of solving a problem. Moreover, this procedure includes: sequence, order, or things that include an organized pattern. While pseudocode on the other hand, is an artificial language used by programmers in order to develop algorithms; hence the name 'pseudo'. In addition to this, it also does not include step-by-step patterns like normal algorithms do.

May I also ask for some tips on how to make my writing better?

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anonymousAlgorithm and pseudocode-- although often mistaken as two things that are interchabgeable-- are vastly different from esch other.

Dashes are unnecessary. It is perfectly understandable but a tad verbose. I do not think you can say they are vastly different; pseudocode is used to describe the algorithm.

The terms "algorithm" and "pseudocode," although often thought to be interchangeable, are vastly different from each other.

anonymousTo point out the difference and clarify the bewilderment of most people, an algortihm is a basic step-by-step procedure of solving a problem.

You are not pointing anything out. You can't clarify bewilderment. I don't know what "basic" means here.

To clarify the difference and eliminate the bewilderment that most people have on this point, an algorithm is a step-by-step procedure for solving a problem.

anonymousMoreover, this procedure includes: sequence, order, or things that include an organized pattern.

You can't say "moreover" yet. The colon is not needed. Sequence and order seem like the same thing. "Things" is fuzzy. "Organized pattern" is nebulous. I do not know what you are trying to say here.

This procedure includes sequence, order, or things that include an organized pattern.

anonymousWhile pseudocode on the other hand, is an artificial language used by programmers in order to develop algorithms; hence the name 'pseudo'.

This is not a sentence; "while" makes it a dependent clause. "On the other hand" is parenthetical. They do not use it in order to do anything; they use it to do things. The semicolon is not called for. "Pseudo" is not the name. It is not clear what "hence" refers to.

Pseudocode, on the other hand, is an artificial (pseudo) language used by programmers to develop algorithms.

anonymousIn addition to this, it also does not include step-by-step patterns like normal algorithms do.

In adition to what, and "in addition" is redundant with "also". I don't think you mean patterns.

Pseudocode does not include step-by-step procedures like normal algorithms do.

anonymousMay I also ask for some tips on how to make my writing better?

Get the matter clear in your mind before trying to write it down—create an outline first if you have to. Be much more concerned with the sense of what you are writing than the delivery. Do not toss in transitions—they have to make sense. Transitions can usually be removed without hurting anything. Be sparing with them.

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