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TinaMr Posted 6 years ago
Grammar

Sentence structure

Which one is more correct:

I am leaving together with my family for France for Summer holiday.

or

I am leaving together with my family for Summer holiday for France.

Or actually both are correct? Emotion: smile

  

Top answer

I would say: I'm leaving with my family to France for the summer holiday. But it's better to take the correction from the teachers here.

  • I would say: I'm leaving with my family to France for the summer holiday.
  • But it's better to take the correction from the teachers here.
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I would say:

I'm leaving with my family to France for the summer holiday.


But it's better to take the correction from the teachers here.

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The two for-phrases seem awkward. Also summer is a common noun and you need a determiner.

My family and I are leaving for France tomorrow. We will enjoy our summer holiday there.

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