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Wildblue Posted 9 years ago
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Sentence Structure
Hello. Could you please tell me if the following sentence is grammatically correct and has a good word choice? Thank you.
"Therefore, regardless of the rejection or acceptance of the manuscript after revision, we were expecting a more profound and specialized comment on the part of the reviewer."
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It's not wrong, but I find it a bit wordy. How about this? eg , Therefore, we were expecting a more profound critique by the reviewer, regardless of rejection or acceptance,
- It's not wrong, but I find it a bit wordy.
- How about this?
- eg , Therefore, we were expecting a more profound critique by the reviewer, regardless of rejection or acceptance,
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It's not wrong, but I find it a bit wordy.
How about this?
eg , Therefore, we were expecting a more profound critique by the reviewer, regardless of rejection or acceptance,
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