Sentence Structure

Hi, according to these two paragraphs, which one sounds good?

1. In a suburban town, children have started going missing mysteriously, and the adults related to the missing children die suspiciously. A rumour has been going around that any adult who encounters a returned child will die mysteriously three days later. Local newspaper reporter Shunya Ezaki refuses to believe that the children are killing the adults, so she starts to investigate the truth behind the strange deaths.
2. In a suburban town, children go missing one after another, and adults around the children also die mysteriously one after another. Rumors circulate online that adults who encounter a returned missing child will die in three days. Local journalist Shunya develops an interest in the strange incidents and begins chasing after the truth.