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Hi, does this sentence sound incomplete?
When a wild rumor becomes true, a local newspaper reporter Shunya Ezaki begins to investigate the deaths of the adults that are linked with temporary child disappearances.
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I wouldn't say "incomplete" exactly, but the connection between the wild rumour and the child disappearances is not very clear. I prefer "who" to "that".
- I wouldn't say "incomplete" exactly, but the connection between the wild rumour and the child disappearances is not very clear.
- I prefer "who" to "that".
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I wouldn't say "incomplete" exactly, but the connection between the wild rumour and the child disappearances is not very clear.
I prefer "who" to "that".
0How about this?
When a wild rumor becomes true, a local newspaper reporter Shunya Ezaki begins to investigate the deaths of the adult's who come in contact with the missing children.
0I got your point sir. I have added more information now. Please check, thank you.
After children go missing in a town and the adults around the missing children die suspiciously, a local newspaper reporter Shunya Ezaki begins to investigate the truth behind the strange deaths.
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