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Is everything correct in this sentence? Grammar? Sentence structure? Articles?


"We are going to create a place on the edge of Taiga, on the gulf of the great Amur River, near lands of the ancient people where everyone could become a real hero and a discoverer!"

  

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This is a little more natural:

"We are going to create a place on the edge of Taiga, on the gulf of the great Amur River, near the lands of the ancient people where everyone can become a real hero and a discoverer!"

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