Sentence structure
Can one say: "Apart from (in addiction to) widely discussed topics, ex. racism, unfairness, etc., touched (described) in this book, I would like to underline one more aspect, getting huge importance in approximately last 2 decades."
It feels that smt. is wrong with this sentence, but can't figure out what...
Top answer
I'm sure you meant to write "in addition to". ," or "such as". " But you need to define "importance".
- I'm sure you meant to write "in addition to".
- ," or "such as".
- " But you need to define "importance".
- Important to whom?
- Or you could use "significance".
Get the Weekly English Kit 📬
New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.
I'm sure you meant to write "in addition to". Where you use "ex.", you should use "for example" or "e.g.," or "such as". I would re-write the sentence to say:
"In addition to widely discussed topics touched on in the book, such as racism and unfairness, I would like to talk about [bring your attention to] another aspect [of what?] that has become of great importance in the
0There's quite a lot wrong. Here are a few comments..
ex. and smt. are not valid abbreviations.
If you list examples, don't say etc. .because we know that there are others.
addiction is a spelling error.
A topic is not the same as an aspect.
getting huge importance in approximately last 2 decades. You need to reword
0
Related Questions