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New Hope Posted 10 years ago
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Does sentence below need restructuring? Please rewrite it if it needs correction from a language point of view.
Some lights are bright and some are dim, for example sunlight and starlight are bright, and candlelight and matchstick fire-light are dim.
Some lights are bright and some are dim, for example sunlight and starlight are bright, and candlelight and matchstick fire-light are dim.
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I would make two sentences, with proper punctuation. Some lights are bright, and some are dim. For example, sunlight and starlight are bright, and candlelight and matchstick fire-light are dim.
- I would make two sentences, with proper punctuation.
- Some lights are bright, and some are dim.
- For example, sunlight and starlight are bright, and candlelight and matchstick fire-light are dim.
- The very last example (matchstick) sounds a bit awkward, but I can't offer a better solution to keep the same image.
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I would make two sentences, with proper punctuation. Some lights are bright, and some are dim. For example, sunlight and starlight are bright, and candlelight and matchstick fire-light are dim. The very last example (matchstick) sounds a bit awkward, but I can't offer a better solution to keep the same image.
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