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Mary Petrusevich Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

Sentence structure

Hi everyone.

Can you help me please. Is the following sentence sounds correct?

"It was hard, exhausting work requiring attendance of 4 days per week"

Thanks in advance!
  

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Mary Petrusevich Is the following sentence sounds correct? It's a bit strange. "Attendance" implies a class or seminar, not a job.

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  • Mary Petrusevich Is the following sentence sounds correct?
  • It's a bit strange.
  • "Attendance" implies a class or seminar, not a job.
  • The participle phrase seems to dangle - it's not connected to a noun.
  • "
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Mary Petrusevich Is the following sentence sounds correct?
It's a bit strange. "Attendance" implies a class or seminar, not a job.
The participle phrase seems to dangle - it's not connected to a noun.

"It was hard, exhausting work which required us to be present 4 days per week."
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