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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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Sentence structure

Hi!

Is this sentence structured correctly? And what about commas?

I have no particular communication with both my children from this marriage, daughter Jane and son Jim, because Jane's daughter, Jacky, is also under my guardianship due to the fact that Jane left her.

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I have no communication with either of my children from this marriage; Jane's daughter Jacky is also under my guardianship because Jane left her.

  • I have no communication with either of my children from this marriage; Jane's daughter Jacky is also under my guardianship because Jane left her.
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I have no communication with either of my children from this marriage; Jane's daughter Jacky is also under my guardianship because Jane left her.

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