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Natalia09 Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

Sentence structure

Dear motherspeakers, could you help me with the below sentence. I am not sure if it sounds good in English. Probably somebody has a suggestion how to put it better:

What does this terrorism, practised in Europe, Africa, the USA under the guise of Islam for many years, do to us?
  

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Natalia09 motherspeakers I suggest that you avoid coining words if you are still a learner. That one has undertones of rudeness. What does this terrorism in Europe, Africa and the USA, long under the guise of Islam, do to us?

  • Natalia09 motherspeakers I suggest that you avoid coining words if you are still a learner.
  • That one has undertones of rudeness.
  • What does this terrorism in Europe, Africa and the USA, long under the guise of Islam, do to us?
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Natalia09motherspeakers
I suggest that you avoid coining words if you are still a learner. That one has undertones of rudeness.

What does this terrorism in Europe, Africa and the USA, long under the guise of Islam, do to us?

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