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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Is this sentence broken up in the correct way?
Around that time, Faros witnessed Itonus de-Droka, the former patriarch of House Droka, the clan of the new emperor, arrive in Vyrox after he was exiled by Hotak and his kinsmen.
  

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after he was being exiled (flows better)

  • after he was being exiled (flows better)
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...after he was being exiled (flows better)

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