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Damironi71 Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Sentence Structure

Can someone please tell me if the sentence below is structured properly?

They not only did not send the product to the customer on time but also did not make enough of it.
  

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I would probably change it to the following Not only did they not send the product to the customer on time, but they also did not make enough of it. but the following sounds more natural to me: Not only did they not send the product to the customer on time, but they didn't make enough of it either.

  • I would probably change it to the following Not only did they not send the product to the customer on time, but they also did not make enough of it.
  • but the following sounds more natural to me: Not only did they not send the product to the customer on time, but they didn't make enough of it either.
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I would probably change it to the following

Not only did they not send the product to the customer on time, but they also did not make enough of it.

but the following sounds more natural to me:

Not only did they not send the product to the customer on time, but they didn't make enough of it either.

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