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Cute butterfly Posted 12 years ago
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Hello, Please who can help me correcting the following sentences :

herefore, those sellers of electronic products who offer their goods online must consider this point and offer the highest quality, as the reputation of the product has a significant bearing on what products people buy, and from whom.

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Therefore, those sellers of electronic products who offer their goods online must consider this point and offer the highest quality, as referrals based on consumer experience have a significant bearing on what products people buy, and from whom.

  • Therefore, those sellers of electronic products who offer their goods online must consider this point and offer the highest quality, as referrals based on consumer experience have a significant bearing on what products people buy, and from whom.
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Therefore, those sellers of electronic products who offer their goods online must consider this point and offer the highest quality, as referrals based on consumer experience have a significant bearing on what products people buy, and from whom.

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