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Lucas21c Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Sentence structure

Could you tell me whether the structure of the following bold sentence is fine?
If not, please correct it.
Thank you.

Whenever a crisis cast its shadows over a company, unusual symptoms appear in the inside of the company. They can be regarded as a kind of a sign, and if failing to notice such a sing and solve it in a positive way, companies soon meet with a crisis.
  

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Whenever a crisis casts its shadow over a company, unusual symptoms appear as signs. If these go unnoticed and are not solved in a positive way , the company will soon meet with the crisis.

  • Whenever a crisis casts its shadow over a company, unusual symptoms appear as signs.
  • If these go unnoticed and are not solved in a positive way , the company will soon meet with the crisis.
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Whenever a crisis casts its shadow over a company, unusual symptoms appear as signs. If these go unnoticed and are not solved in a positive way, the company will soon meet with the crisis.
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Thank you for your help, Mr.Micawber.

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