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Lucas21c Posted 13 years ago
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Sentence structure
Could you tell me whether the structure of the following sentence is okay?
Thank you.
In addition, when local communities build an extensive support system allowing women to hold down a job and run a household at the same time, they can enjoy enough chances to participate in many social fields.
Thank you.
In addition, when local communities build an extensive support system allowing women to hold down a job and run a household at the same time, they can enjoy enough chances to participate in many social fields.
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Yes. I'd repeat 'the women' instead of 'they'. Do you need to say 'can enjoy', or just simply 'enjoy'?
- Yes.
- I'd repeat 'the women' instead of 'they'.
- Do you need to say 'can enjoy', or just simply 'enjoy'?
- The word 'enough' seems not quite right.
- How about 'adequate'?
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Yes.
I'd repeat 'the women' instead of 'they'.
Do you need to say 'can enjoy', or just simply 'enjoy'?
The word 'enough' seems not quite right. How about 'adequate'?
Clive
I'd repeat 'the women' instead of 'they'.
Do you need to say 'can enjoy', or just simply 'enjoy'?
The word 'enough' seems not quite right. How about 'adequate'?
Clive
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