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Lucas21c Posted 14 years ago
Grammar
Sentence Structure
Could you tell me whether the following sentence is fine?
I am a little worried if it is too long and complicated to sound natural.
Modern companies try to give consumers more choice in the types of products by making their prices range from low to high prices even when the consumers buy the same kind of products.
I am a little worried if it is too long and complicated to sound natural.
Modern companies try to give consumers more choice in the types of products by making their prices range from low to high prices even when the consumers buy the same kind of products.
Top answer
Hi, Yes, very poor.. Try again. You might want to talk about 'a range of products'.
- Hi, Yes, very poor..
- Try again.
- You might want to talk about 'a range of products'.
- Clive
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Hi,
Yes, very poor.. Try again.
You might want to talk about 'a range of products'.
Clive
Yes, very poor.. Try again.
You might want to talk about 'a range of products'.
Clive
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Hi, Clive. This is my revised one.
Modern companies provide consumers with more choices by making a range of products cost various so consumers can have many options to choose one of products of the same kind.
Modern companies provide consumers with more choices by making a range of products cost various so consumers can have many options to choose one of products of the same kind.
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Hi,
This is my revised one.
Modern companies provide consumers with more choices by making a range of products cost various so consumers can have many options to choose one of products of the same kind.
Still not great.
How about just this?
This is my revised one.
Modern companies provide consumers with more choices by making a range of products cost various so consumers can have many options to choose one of products of the same kind.
Still not great.
How about just this?
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Thank you for your comments, Clive.
By the way, could you tell how I can add to the sentence the information that companies make a range of cost of one product by adjusting quantity or quality of the same product?
By the way, could you tell how I can add to the sentence the information that companies make a range of cost of one product by adjusting quantity or quality of the same product?
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Hi,
That seems too much to squeeze into the first sentence.
Add another,
eg In addition, each product comes in various quantities and qualities.
Clive
That seems too much to squeeze into the first sentence.
Add another,
eg In addition, each product comes in various quantities and qualities.
Clive
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