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Lucas21c Posted 14 years ago
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Could you confirm whether the following sentence sounds natural?
Thank you.
The authour has friendly attitudes about conservative governments and puts high evaluation on conservative governments in USA and UK between the late 1970's and the early 1980's, believing that they restored effective leadership in its own country.
Thank you.
The authour has friendly attitudes about conservative governments and puts high evaluation on conservative governments in USA and UK between the late 1970's and the early 1980's, believing that they restored effective leadership in its own country.
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Hi, No, it doesn't. Would you like to try again? Make the first clause a separate sentence, Tr to avoid repeating words and phrases, What does 'its' refer to?
- Hi, No, it doesn't.
- Would you like to try again?
- Make the first clause a separate sentence, Tr to avoid repeating words and phrases, What does 'its' refer to?
- Say 'the USA', 'the UK'.
- Clive
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Hi,
No, it doesn't.
Would you like to try again?
Make the first clause a separate sentence,
Tr to avoid repeating words and phrases,
What does 'its' refer to?
No, it doesn't.
Would you like to try again?
Make the first clause a separate sentence,
Tr to avoid repeating words and phrases,
What does 'its' refer to?
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Thank you for your comments. I revised it again.
The authour has friendly attitudes about conservative governments of USA and UK between the late 1970's and the early 1980's. Also, he puts high evaluation on those governments , believing that they restored effective leadership on economy in their own country.
The authour has friendly attitudes about conservative governments of USA and UK between the late 1970's and the early 1980's. Also, he puts high evaluation on those governments , believing that they restored effective leadership on economy in their own country.
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Hi,
The authour has friendly attitudes about conservative governments of USA and UK between the late 1970's and the early 1980's. Also, he puts high evaluation on those governments , believing that they restored effective leadership on economy in their own country.
I suggest
The author praises the conservative governments of the U
The authour has friendly attitudes about conservative governments of USA and UK between the late 1970's and the early 1980's. Also, he puts high evaluation on those governments , believing that they restored effective leadership on economy in their own country.
I suggest
The author praises the conservative governments of the U
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