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Nikoo Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Sentence Structure

I feel that the following sentence has not been structured properly.

Would you please help me with this?

"The delicate arches of the sanctuary makes the lover remind of his sweetheart’s beautifully curved eyebrows and become so carried away with this dream that a great cheer goes up from the arches which are the beholders of his spiritual state."

Thanks in advance

Nikoo
  

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The delicate arches of the sanctuary remind the lover of his sweetheart’s beautifully curved eyebrows , and he is so carried away with this dream that a great cheer goes up from the arches, the beholders of his spiritual state.

— Mister Micawber

  • The delicate arches of the sanctuary remind the lover of his sweetheart’s beautifully curved eyebrows , and he is so carried away with this dream that a great cheer goes up from the arches, the beholders of his spiritual state.
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The delicate arches of the sanctuary remind the lover of his sweetheart’s beautifully curved eyebrows, and he is so carried away with this dream that a great cheer goes up from the arches, the beholders of his spiritual state.
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