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Moon7296 Posted 15 years ago
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Thinking improves when parts of the mind are given other tasks, are charged with listening to music or following a line of trees.
I found the underlined parts above emumerate ideas connecting to 'when parts of the mind.'
I don't know why the writer didn't take out are in 'are charged~' while are is taken out in 'following~.'
I found the underlined parts above emumerate ideas connecting to 'when parts of the mind.'
I don't know why the writer didn't take out are in 'are charged~' while are is taken out in 'following~.'
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Hi, Thinking improves when parts of the mind are given other tasks , are charged with listening to music or following a line of trees. ' The structure is not quite right. Let me offer some other versions for you to consider.
- Hi, Thinking improves when parts of the mind are given other tasks , are charged with listening to music or following a line of trees.
- ' The structure is not quite right.
- Let me offer some other versions for you to consider.
- Thinking improves when parts of the mind are given other tasks, and (when parts of the mind) are charged with listening to music or following a line of trees.
- This is not really the intended meaning.
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Hi,
Thinking improves when parts of the mind are given other tasks, are charged with listening to music or following a line of trees.
I found the underlined parts above emumerate ideas connecting to 'when parts of the mind.'
I don't know why the writer didn't take out are in 'are charged~' while are is taken out in 'following~.'
Thinking improves when parts of the mind are given other tasks, are charged with listening to music or following a line of trees.
I found the underlined parts above emumerate ideas connecting to 'when parts of the mind.'
I don't know why the writer didn't take out are in 'are charged~' while are is taken out in 'following~.'
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Hi.
Ah.. the structure is not quite right to you..
So when you read the structure, you can read the writer's intent but it's a little difficult to catch at once? That's why it's better to say '~~ such as littening ~~ of trees' like you said?
Ah.. the structure is not quite right to you..
So when you read the structure, you can read the writer's intent but it's a little difficult to catch at once? That's why it's better to say '~~ such as littening ~~ of trees' like you said?
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