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We are still within the planning stages of our IRPB Branch Retreat, however I wanted to update you with a few details and submit a place holder on your calendars
  

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Hi, We are still within the planning stages of our IRPB Branch Retreat, however I wanted to update you with a few details and submit a place holder on your calendars We are still in the planning stages for our IRPB Branch Retreat. However, I wanted to update you about a few details and ask you to put a place holder on your calendars. Clive

  • Hi, We are still within the planning stages of our IRPB Branch Retreat, however I wanted to update you with a few details and submit a place holder on your calendars We are still in the planning stages for our IRPB Branch Retreat.
  • However, I wanted to update you about a few details and ask you to put a place holder on your calendars.
  • Clive
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Hi,

We are still within the planning stages of our IRPB Branch Retreat, however I wanted to update you with a few details and submit a place holder on your calendars

We are still in the planning stages for our IRPB Branch Retreat. However, I wanted to update you about a few details and ask you to put a place holder on your calendars.



Clive

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