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Meimei MianDianRen Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Sentence structure!!!!

Dear All,

Could you please check the sentence? How should I write another way?

Sue and I will be going to attend the training at CBI on 4th to 6th November ’09. While we are attending the course Nina will be arrange for our places.

OR Nina will be calling someone to substitute both of our places.

I would like to inform you that I am taking leave on Saturday 7th, Monday 9th and Saturday 14th November’09

Thank you very much.
  

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Would this work for you: Sue and I will be off site / out of office for training at CBI on November 4th to 6th. Nina will arrange staffing to take care of our posts during our absence, . I would like to inform you that I am taking a few days off on November’7th, 9th and 14th .

— Dimsumexpress

  • Would this work for you: Sue and I will be off site / out of office for training at CBI on November 4th to 6th.
  • Nina will arrange staffing to take care of our posts during our absence, .
  • I would like to inform you that I am taking a few days off on November’7th, 9th and 14th .
  • To my understanding, a leave is usually perceived as absence from work more than 3 consecutive workdays or longer in the US.
  • There are different type of leaves which are treated differently.
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Would this work for you:

Sue and I will be off site / out of office for training at CBI on November 4th to 6th. Nina will arrange staffing to take care of our posts during our absence, .

I would like to inform you that I am taking a few days off on November’7th, 9th and 14th .

To my understanding, a leave is usually perceived as absence from work more than
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