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Edwardp Posted 17 years ago
Grammar
Sentence Structure
Hi I'm new to the forums.
Can anyone help with the following sentence? Is the structure correct? It's going in a professional mailer and I'm unsure of the structure/grammar.
We are seeking qualified individuals who will join us as we expand across the
country, providing professional, necessary transportation services to people in your area.
Thanks for any help you can provide.
Can anyone help with the following sentence? Is the structure correct? It's going in a professional mailer and I'm unsure of the structure/grammar.
We are seeking qualified individuals who will join us as we expand across the
country, providing professional, necessary transportation services to people in your area.
Thanks for any help you can provide.
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Hi, Can anyone help with the following sentence? Is the structure correct? It's going in a professional mailer and I'm unsure of the structure/grammar.
- Hi, Can anyone help with the following sentence?
- Is the structure correct?
- It's going in a professional mailer and I'm unsure of the structure/grammar.
- We are seeking qualified individuals who will join us as we expand across the country, providing professional, necessary transportation services to people in your area.
- It seems a little long and meandering to me.
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Hi,
Can anyone help with the following sentence? Is the structure correct? It's going in a professional mailer and I'm unsure of the structure/grammar.
We are seeking qualified individuals who will join us as we expand across the
country, providing professio
Can anyone help with the following sentence? Is the structure correct? It's going in a professional mailer and I'm unsure of the structure/grammar.
We are seeking qualified individuals who will join us as we expand across the
country, providing professio
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Edward - Welcome to the Forums.
I am sure you will get some good comments.
The sentence is OK, up until the word "providing". From then on, it's not clear if "we" are providing, or "individuals" are providing. I would put the business description in a separate sentence, and the qualifications of your applicants in other sentences.
I am sure you will get some good comments.
The sentence is OK, up until the word "providing". From then on, it's not clear if "we" are providing, or "individuals" are providing. I would put the business description in a separate sentence, and the qualifications of your applicants in other sentences.
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