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Writerhopeful Posted 19 years ago
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Sentence structure

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00- Toward the end and not because her illness and weakened condition predicated her decision, she abstained from carnal desire, but was unable to dismiss the love and spiritual attachment she held for him. -02br
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— Philip

  • 0 01blockquote 01cite 10Writerhopeful12cite 10Please advise if this sentence structure is correct and understandable:12br 12br 10- Toward the end11b 11font 10 [,]12font 12b 10 and not because her illness and weakened condition 11b 11font 10[had]12font 12b 10 predicated her decision, she abstained from carnal 10desire, but was10 unable to dismiss the love and spiritual attachment she held for him.
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01cite10Writerhopeful12cite10Please advise if this sentence structure is correct and understandable:12br
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0 Thank you very much Phillip. Wow, I didn't expect to receive a reply so soon. I am pleased the changes were minor and in a way, it even boosts my confidence. 0-
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