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Akki Posted 20 years ago
Grammar

Sentence structure

I am having problems with the structure of this sentence. Can you make it sound smoother?

"They work behind the scene, yet I want them to know that their constant efforts to keep me happy are not forgotten."
  

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I'm trying to paraphrase it: Although they work in a way that people in general are not aware of, yet I want to tell them that I will remember their persistent efforts to keep me cheerful.

  • I'm trying to paraphrase it: Although they work in a way that people in general are not aware of, yet I want to tell them that I will remember their persistent efforts to keep me cheerful.
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I'm trying to paraphrase it:

Although they work in a way that people in general are not aware of, yet I want to tell them that I will remember their persistent efforts to keep me cheerful.
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Hi,

"They work behind the scene, yet I want them to know that their constant efforts to keep me happy are not forgotten."

I don't really see anything with the structure of this sentence.

The common phrase is 'work behind the scenes'.

'To keep me happy' is OK, but I wonder if that reflects y

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