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Rishonly Posted 21 years ago
Grammar

SENTENCE STRUCTURE

Would you please verify if the following sentence is grammatically correct and punctuations are properly used?

You are right about USAuto's concern about the patent rights. The immediate solution that comes into my mind is "trust", and when two businesses have an alliance in manufacturing a product or delivering a service , I think, both businesses should have some sort of trust on each other, having rigid business contracts and patent laws.

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You are right about USAuto's concern about patent rights . The immediate solution that comes to mind is "trust", and when two businesses have an alliance for manufacturing a product or delivering a service, I think both businesses should have some sort of trust in each other, even though they may operate according to? rigid business contracts and patent laws.

— CalifJim

  • You are right about USAuto's concern about patent rights .
  • The immediate solution that comes to mind is "trust", and when two businesses have an alliance for manufacturing a product or delivering a service, I think both businesses should have some sort of trust in each other, even though they may operate according to?
  • rigid business contracts and patent laws.
  • The last phrase stumps me.
  • While talking about trust you introduce ideas which represent lack of trust.
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You are right about USAuto's concern about patent rights. The immediate solution that comes to mind is "trust", and when two businesses have an alliance for manufacturing a product or delivering a service, I think both businesses should have some sort of trust in each other, even though they may operate according to? rigid business contracts and patent laws.
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Thanks for the correction, CalifJim. I realize I combined trust and mistrust together.

Regards,
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"...even though they may be operating in accordance with..."?

MrP
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