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Adonis Posted 21 years ago
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Thses sentences are my homework.
Can you help me censor them?
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I share the view that the learning history and literature outweighs learning science and mathematics.
Admittedly, if students can get high grades on science and mathematics, they will get permission to enter a prestigious university. However, they can not teach student how to think independently.
Before they become politician, they had outstanding performance in their field of physics, biology, chemistry, or whatever.
I think that liberal arts take precedence over any other subjects.
Thses sentences are my homework.
Can you help me censor them?
Thank you for your help.
I share the view that the learning history and literature outweighs learning science and mathematics.
Admittedly, if students can get high grades on science and mathematics, they will get permission to enter a prestigious university. However, they can not teach student how to think independently.
Before they become politician, they had outstanding performance in their field of physics, biology, chemistry, or whatever.
I think that liberal arts take precedence over any other subjects.
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'Edit', I think-- not 'censor', Adonis. I share the view that the learning of history and literature outweighs the learning of science and mathematics. Admittedly, if students can get high grades in science and mathematics, they will be able to enter a prestigious university.
- 'Edit', I think-- not 'censor', Adonis.
- I share the view that the learning of history and literature outweighs the learning of science and mathematics.
- Admittedly, if students can get high grades in science and mathematics, they will be able to enter a prestigious university.
- However, these courses cannot teach students how to think independently.
- Before they become politicians, they had outstanding careers in their fields of physics, biology, chemistry, or whatever.
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'Edit', I think-- not 'censor', Adonis.
I share the view that the learning of history and literature outweighs the learning of science and mathematics.
Admittedly, if students can get high grades in science and mathematics, they will be able to enter a prestigious university. However, these courses cannot teach students how to think independently.
Before they be
I share the view that the learning of history and literature outweighs the learning of science and mathematics.
Admittedly, if students can get high grades in science and mathematics, they will be able to enter a prestigious university. However, these courses cannot teach students how to think independently.
Before they be
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Hello Mister Micawber
Thank you for your help.
Can you help me edit these sentences again?
Thank you.
Students make use of history to assimilate ancestors'intelligence. Hence, it can help students not only sharpen their critical thinking but also rethink something impartial in society.
Liberal arts are credited with stimulating students'thinking and help
Thank you for your help.
Can you help me edit these sentences again?
Thank you.
Students make use of history to assimilate ancestors'intelligence. Hence, it can help students not only sharpen their critical thinking but also rethink something impartial in society.
Liberal arts are credited with stimulating students'thinking and help
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Sure:
'Students make use of history to assimilate the knowledge of their ancestors. Hence, history can help students to not only sharpen their critical thinking but also reconsider their society impartially.'
'The liberal arts are credited with stimulating student thinking and helping develop ethics and morals.'
Please notice, Adonis, how revision usually e
'Students make use of history to assimilate the knowledge of their ancestors. Hence, history can help students to not only sharpen their critical thinking but also reconsider their society impartially.'
'The liberal arts are credited with stimulating student thinking and helping develop ethics and morals.'
Please notice, Adonis, how revision usually e
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