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As proverb says, dancing is integrated into a whole culture. People can construct their own culture by dance.
To celebrate their children who reach an age of 18, they hold a grown-up dance in which these children have to perform their own talent for something that prove their sophisticated mental to take on more responsibilities
Although dance just show some physical expression on the surface, the dance is behind much meaning most people don’t know it would have help people to shape and enrich their own specific life
I don't know how to correct these sentences.
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As proverb says, dancing is integrated into a whole culture. People can construct their own culture by dance.
To celebrate their children who reach an age of 18, they hold a grown-up dance in which these children have to perform their own talent for something that prove their sophisticated mental to take on more responsibilities
Although dance just show some physical expression on the surface, the dance is behind much meaning most people don’t know it would have help people to shape and enrich their own specific life
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As the proverb says, dancing is integrated into the whole culture [THIS DOES NOT SOUND LIKE A PROVERB]. People can reconstruct their own culture through dance. To celebrate their children's reaching the age of 18, they hold a coming-of-age dance in which these children demonstrate their talent and prove their maturity to take on more responsibilities.
- As the proverb says, dancing is integrated into the whole culture [THIS DOES NOT SOUND LIKE A PROVERB].
- People can reconstruct their own culture through dance.
- To celebrate their children's reaching the age of 18, they hold a coming-of-age dance in which these children demonstrate their talent and prove their maturity to take on more responsibilities.
- Although dance shows only physical expression on the surface, behind this there is much meaning which helps people to shape and enrich their lives.
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As the proverb says, dancing is integrated into the whole culture [THIS DOES NOT SOUND LIKE A PROVERB]. People can reconstruct their own culture through dance.
To celebrate their children's reaching the age of 18, they hold a coming-of-age dance in which these children demonstrate their talent and prove their maturity to take on more responsibilities.
Although dance shows only
To celebrate their children's reaching the age of 18, they hold a coming-of-age dance in which these children demonstrate their talent and prove their maturity to take on more responsibilities.
Although dance shows only
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