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Ryansamturner Posted 13 years ago
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'With my head slumped down to the floor and a choking lump in my throat, I lifelessly drifted back into the classroom.'
I'm arguing with myself whether or not to enter 'with' before the word choking. I'm sure it makes sense as is but any thoughts would be appreciated.
Thanks
Ryan
I'm arguing with myself whether or not to enter 'with' before the word choking. I'm sure it makes sense as is but any thoughts would be appreciated.
Thanks
Ryan
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The sentence could use improvement: My head slumped to the floor and a lump in my throat, I drifted lifelessly back into the classroom.
- The sentence could use improvement: My head slumped to the floor and a lump in my throat, I drifted lifelessly back into the classroom.
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The sentence could use improvement:
My head slumped to the floor and a lump in my throat, I drifted lifelessly back into the classroom.
My head slumped to the floor and a lump in my throat, I drifted lifelessly back into the classroom.
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