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The driver, who was a government appointed officer, was on his way back from the garage to office and was driving his car recklessly and due to his negligence, he hit a deer on the road.
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The driver, a government official, was driving his car recklessly on his way back from the garage to his office and hit a deer.
- The driver, a government official, was driving his car recklessly on his way back from the garage to his office and hit a deer.
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The driver, a government official, was driving his car recklessly on his way back from the garage to his office and hit a deer.
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