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Media activism becomes necessary when the law machinery fails to perform its duties which it was obliged to do it.

  

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Say eg Media activism becomes necessary when the law machinery of the law fails to perform its duties. which it was obliged to do it . The word 'duties' already includes the idea of obligation, so omit it.

— Clive

  • Say eg Media activism becomes necessary when the law machinery of the law fails to perform its duties.
  • which it was obliged to do it .
  • The word 'duties' already includes the idea of obligation, so omit it.
  • Clive
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eg Media activism becomes necessary when the law machinery of the law fails to perform its duties. which it was obliged to do it.

The word 'duties' already includes the idea of obligation, so omit it.

Clive

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