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00I am not sure whether the these sentences make sense in term of grammar and semantics. 02br
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001. Making any suitable law has to take many factors into account. Besides, laws should be so flexible that they can conform to the need of new trend, environment, and circumstance.02br
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002. It was not until Enron scandal happened in 2002 that this make Taiwan’s legislature to rethink the current business laws that couldn’t prevent cunning entrepreneurs from embezzling companies’ funds and making false account. This event made Taiwan’s legislators amend/alter/change the portion of business laws for the sake of the long-term economic development. 02br
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00Which verb amend/alter/change can be suitable in this sentence? 02br
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