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00I am not sure whether the four sentences make sense in term of grammar and semantics. 02br
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00100. Society should identify children with special talent who are cultivated and nurtured at an early age so that they can make a breakthrough in their areas.02br
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002. Children who have a genius for arts must be identified at their early age during which children have more opportunity to develop their unique skills and vivid imagination00.02br
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003.The distinction between professional and other academic fields and artistic domains is that the former doesn’t place much emphasis on inspiration and imagination. Consequently, those who are successful in political, business, or academic fields don’t receive relevant training in their childhood. 02br
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004.It was not until kerry Kuo stepped into a job market that he began to gain the knowledge of electronics and business. By his effort, he leads his company to be the world’s fourth largest electronics manufacturing service (EMS) provider. 02br
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